Peer Feedback - Lauren Mabbett

Cover Feedback;

• Image used is great, clear understanding of medium close up and that is conventional of the magazines now a days!
• The cover lines are clear and bold which is just what a magazine needs.
• As already discussed more work on the magazine is needed in terms of prices, datelines and banners but this can be put into practise afterwards.
• The barcode is clear and effective, put in a simple yet good place and wont need much more doing in that area.
• Try adding splashes or effects (Such as a star with writing in advertising something)
• Over all good use of colour scheme, if you are sticking to this try use more gold colours in the banners etc to catch the audiences eyes! ( It also looks very classy)
• Im not sure the second image is needed however that image would look great as the actual cover! try do a draft with that one aswell! :)