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Strengths: Photos look good and well layed out.

Areas of improvement: Check spelling and proof read it. The CON needs to be more on the page.

Stengths: nice variation of photos, good use of colour.

Areas of improvement: a bit simple? and some of the text doesnt work 'fashion'.

Strengths: I like the variety of pictures and the continuous colour scheme; it shows that it's consistent. I also like the way the colours and outfits work well with your genre.

Areas of improvement: The title could maybe be in a different layout and the pages could be set out a bit more neatly.

Other Comments: Overall, I like the way the colour scheme works with your genre and the variety of different pictures shows what else is in your magazine.