Teachers Feed back

 

 

          After looking at my teacher’s feedback on one of my draft contents pages I will consider the changes she suggests for my next drafts and my final contents page. I have a lot of black space on the top of this draft I will try and re arrange this so I don't have so much free space. I need to include the name of my magazine so I  will rearrange and maybe add the name of my magazine here. The photos I added to this contents page don't seem to create continuity throughout my magazine. I will look at the different photos I have took and see which ones link in with my product. The other smaller image I have included doesn't create more continuity throughout my magazine so I think I need to take this image off my magazine. The text on this draft is not very clear and straight forward to read. I need to make it clear which ones are my headlines and smaller text underneath explaining what the article or story is about. I need to separate the sections so they're easy to read i need the reader to be able to easily locate which story goes with each headline and page number. On this draft contents page I’ve only included 23 pages the price i have priced my product I think I need to add more page numbers. I will place all my page numbers down the side next to the story's so they're easy to read. I need to change the page numbers so they're straight forward to need and they all stand out in comparison to the text.